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Image size
5184x3456px 9.23 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 7D
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
65 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 6, 2010, 4:22:56 PM
Sensor Size
23mm
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" title="Hi!"/> Hello there, I found this browsing the critiquables section.First thing I want to say is I love the colors you captured in the sky, I think this is my favorite of all the ones I saw you posted of it. It looks very beautiful, so many colors and patterns, absolutely lovely.
There are a few suggestions I Have, first, the horizon is a bit tilted, maybe you could straighten it out a little bit more?
Second, though the sky is your main focus here, I think that the top holds quite a bit of empty space, maybe if you had lowered your camera and caught some of the water? I think that way we could have seen more of the bottom as well giving the photo a little bit of an anchor.
Other than those few things, I the main thing that made this one catch my eye was the brightness and how many patterns you had in the sky.
And I hope you don't mind but as for all of the images in whole, I like how you captured so many you can see the differences and changes in time, it's quite appealing. Nice work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
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" title="Heart"/>TORi
*** please do not pay attention to the stars, the critique is in what I wrote ***